Showing posts with label Week 10. Show all posts
Showing posts with label Week 10. Show all posts

Thursday, March 22, 2018

Week 10 Story: The Origin of Kut-O-Yis

The first memory I have is quite odd. All I remember is opening my eyes and seeing an old couple, a man and a woman who both looked like they hadn't eaten anything in months. Their faces were filled with confusion, adoration, and sadness. Their eyes had a very innocent look in them, and I could immediately sense the goodness in them. I felt the woman pick me up as the couple began talking about how to hide me so that "he" wouldn't find me and kill me. I had no idea who "he" was. All I knew was that they planned on lying to him and telling him that I was a girl, instead of a boy, so that he would be more inclined to let me grow into my adult years. The last thing I heard that day before closing my eyes was them giving me a name: Kut-O-Yis, the Blood Boy.

After my fourth day with them, I spoke to the old woman and told her, "Hold me in turn to each one of these lodge poles, and when I come to the last one I shall fall out of my lashings and be grown up." The woman did as I said, and when I was held to the final pole, I was already a grown man. Now I could finally do something about the couple's situation. I looked out the window of their lodge and saw another lodge with an abundant supply of food hanging outside. 

I then asked the couple, "Why do you not eat? There is so much food across the yard. If you want, I can go ask those people for you." 

"Shhhhhh!" Said the woman. "Our son-in-law lives over there with our three daughters. He does not give us any food to eat and he forbids our daughters from doing so as well. The only reason we are alive is that our daughters sometimes find a way to sneak around and throw us some food once in a while."

At this, I became very angry. What kind of a family doesn't provide for each other and simply REFUSES to let the others eat? Anyway, I thought of a plan to teach the son-in-law a lesson. I told the old man to show me where they usually hunt for food, so that the next day, we could get there before the son-in-law, kill some buffalo, and hang it outside our home for once. 

The next day, I awoke the old man right before dawn and we set out to find the buffalo. Within a few minutes, we found one and I killed it. Shortly after, we could hear another person coming. It was the son-in-law. I quickly hid behind a bush so the son-in-law wouldn't know what was about to hit him. I heard the son-in-law look at the old man and scold him for going to hunt without him. I also saw him pull the dead buffalo out from under the old man and push him aside. Right when the son-in-law turned his back to go back home, I shot an arrow at him. It went straight through his back and came out through his chest. He died instantly.

"Now," I said to the old man. "You can take what is rightfully yours."

We quickly told the wife and the daughters about our victory and how they were finally free from the son-in-law's evil hands. The amount of gratitude that the family showed me truly made me realize how I changed their lives for the better. The whole time I was devising a plan against the son-in-law, I was doing it because I was angry at him for treating his family how he was. I never even imagined how big of an impact I was making until it was over. That was the moment I decided to save lives for a living. Nowadays, I travel to other cities and purposely look for trouble, so that I can free any souls that are captured by evil beings. 

Source: A Native American camp.

Bibliography: Kut-O-Yis, the Blood Boy.

Author's Note: This story was inspired by the Blackfoot Native American stories, namely the Kut-O-Yis stories. In it, an old couple lived with their three daughters. Along came a brave hunter who would help the family hunt and give them food. Eventually, the couple decided to marry their daughters to the man. After a while, however, the son-in-law got more stingy and stopped providing for the couple. The two oldest daughters also wouldn't give them anything; only the youngest daughter sometimes sneaked food into the old couple's house. One day, the old man was able to sneak a clot of blood from a wounded buffalo into his quiver without the son-in-law noticing. He quickly went home and told his wife to set up a kettle so they could cook it. Suddenly, they hear a baby crying from inside the kettle. They know the son-in-law will soon hear a baby crying and kill it if is a boy, and that the son-in-law will want to benefit from having another wife, so they pretend the baby is a girl. They call the baby Kut-O-Yis, or a clot of blood. The child speaks to the old woman on the fourth day of being born and tells her to place him against the poles (I copied that dialogue from the story directly). He suddenly grows into an adult and devises a plan to get revenge against the son-in-law. Kut-O-Yis and the old man go hunt before the son-in-law one day, and when he son-in-law comes to take the buffalo and tries to kill the old man, Kut-O-Yis kills him and also punishes the daughters for not being more sympathetic towards the old couple. The rest of the story involves Kut-O-Yis traveling to different cities and saving other people or animals from evil things. I decided to keep the story very similar to the original, but changed it to Kut-O-Yis's point of view instead of it being in the third person. I also made all three daughters more sympathetic towards the couple, instead of just the youngest.

Wednesday, March 21, 2018

Reading Notes: Native American Blackfoot Stories, Part B

The Smart Woman Chief

  • I thought it was interesting that men and women didn't know of the other gender for a while
  • I also liked the part where the woman taught the man a lesson
    • "If they can't handle you at your worst, they sure don't deserve you at your best"
    • ^^ Basically the vibe I got from the end of the story
Bobcat and the Birch Tree
  • Two origin stories in this one!!! Why bobcats look the way they do, and how birch trees got their pattern.
  • Also.. how does the Old Man have powers? Where did he get them from? Was he born that way or did he do something to get those? In either case, an evil man like that shouldn't be able to have powers.
The Red-Eyed Duck
  • Another origin story! 
  • I can't believe the Old Man was going about on his way and the ducks asked him to stop for a song and dance, and he did that to them!
  • If they hadn't asked him to dance and sing, would he have just gone about his way?? 
Source: The Horned Grebe, from the Red-Eyed Duck.

Kut-O-Yis, The Blood Boy
  • This was a really interesting story!! It was split up into 5 parts and I was drawn in immediately 
  • Seemed like some sort of super-hero, who killed all the bad guys (and girls) and saved all the people in distress
  • I may retell this story and make a super-hero story out of it! 
  • The way Kut-O-Yis was born was a little weird and confusing, so I could focus on just that part if I wanted.. we'll see!
BibliographyGrinnell's Blackfoot Stories, Part B.

Reading Notes: Native American Blackfoot Stories, Part A

Two Fast Runners

  • Origin story!!! - I love those
  • Maybe I could write about other aspects of animals, such as how or why cheetahs got to be so fast, or how certain animals or insects got the pattern of fur that they did
  • Also reminded me of the tortoise and the hare a little bit, but with each side outsmarting the other once
The Wolf Man
  • A little hard to follow - maybe I could rewrite a part of this to make more sense
  • I thought it was a bit messed up that the two wives treated their husband so unfairly and that they even tried killing him
  • I may write a story that goes into more depth about each situation with the women
    • Ex. Why did the women hate him so much?
    • Ex. Why did the man get married to each woman? What drove their relationship? Because apparently they didn't love each other, soooo
    • Ex. What actually happened to them at the end?
Source: The Wolf Man, or at least how I imagined a wolf-man to be like if he could switch between the two forms.

The Dog and the Root Digger
  • Why did the man hide all the buffalo from everyone else? Just so his family would have something to eat at all times? Or was there an alternative reason?
  • Kind of reminded me of the animagus characters in Harry Potter, who could change shape into an animal form whenever they wanted to. Both the dog and the root digger could be like Harry Potter characters in my story, if I decide to re-tell this one.
The Theft from the Sun
  • This was an interesting story just because it personified the Sun so much and had the main character not realize that the whole world was encompassed by the Sun at one point or another.
  • If I were to retell this story, I would personify something else, such as the Earth, or the grass, or another planet, or even a type of food or something. Something that is very abundant and common and something that I could write a whole story about.
Bibliography: Grinnell's Blackfoot Stories, Part A.